I have really been in the mood to write lately. You couldn't tell by the volume of posts recently, could you? Anyway, I wrote this poem two ways, and I couldn't decide which I liked better. They're the same to begin with, but the endings are different. Anyway, I thought I would post both. And I'm working on, well I have an idea of what I want to do for the second prompt Kayla gave me. So... be looking for that in the future :)
Memories Forgotten
I search the frozen faces
And see smiles of laughter,
Eyes full of joy.
These pictures breathe contentment.
I close my eyes and reminisce,
Thinking back on memories forgotten,
And I smile.
Those were happy times.
Lost in thought, I wonder,
Do my eyes still dance with laughter,
Still convey contentment?
I am still content with life;
Is that the picture I project?
Memories Forgotten (take 2)
I search the frozen faces
And see smiles of laughter,
Eyes full of joy.
These pictures breathe contentment.
I close my eyes and reminisce,
Thinking back on times together,
And I smile.
Those were happy times.
Lost in thought, I wonder
If you still remember that joy,
Still recall those times.
Or are they simply memories forgotten?
4 comments:
I like the 2nd one best. I started a similar poem before school ended last semester, but it never amounted to anything. Thanks for putting my thoughts into words too. ;)I miss you.
I think you're right; the second one is better. I just hate to keep posting such melancholy poems because it doesn't reflect how I'm feeling at present :)
I like both of your poems and enjoy the insight that you put into them.
I read them both quite fast, with no time for high flown literary analysis, but I definitly like the first one better.
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